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  谁能帮我修改一下雅思作文并估计个分数?(剑4test2task1)TheabovegraphandpiechartillustratethedemandforelectricityinEnglandduringasingledayinsummerandwinter,andalsothepercentageofelectricityusageinanaver

  谁能帮我修改一下雅思作文并估计个分数?

  (剑4test2task1)TheabovegraphandpiechartillustratethedemandforelectricityinEnglandduringasingledayinsummerandwinter,andalsothepercentageofelectricityusageinanaverageEnglishhome.Wecaneasilyseethatelectricityishighlydemandedinwinter,andmostisdonatedtoheatingsystems.

  Thegraphoftypicaldailyelectricitydemandinwinterfirstincreasedsharplyfrom3500toalmost4000between12amand3am,thenitdroppedquicklytothelevelof3000at9am.Whileinsummer,itdecreasedsteadilyduringtheseninehours.Inthenextthreehours,bothofthemwentup,andthelatterreacheditshighestpointat2000.Fromthisspot,thewintergraphcontinuedtogoupstablywhilethesummeronedroppedbackto1800beforeitstayingsmoothuntil9pmwhenbothbegantomoveupwards.11pmsawthelargestdemandforelectricityinwinter,almost4500,andafterthat,bothslidesdowntotheirbeginningunits.Meanwhile,52.5percentsofelectricitywasusedforheatingroomsandwater,whichwasthreetimesasthepercentageforovens,kettlesandwashingmachines.Theusageforlightingandvacuumcleaners,etc.sharestheleftthirtypercentagewithequalportion.

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2020-05-27 08:57
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梁荣庆

  写Academic论文,首先要避免主语代词的出现,比如在你第一段中:Wecaneasilyseethat这句最好改成itcanbeeasilyseenthat.由此类推.Thegraphoftypicaldailyelectricitydemandinwinterfirstincreased...

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