【雅思作文帮我批改下~~谢谢啦~（给个分数,怎么提高呢?）ThebelowingtableshowsusthepercentageofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertywhichwasinAustraliain1999.Thetablegivesussixtypesofthefamily.】

　　雅思作文帮我批改下~~谢谢啦~（给个分数,怎么提高呢?）

　　ThebelowingtableshowsusthepercentageofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertywhichwasinAustraliain1999.Thetablegivesussixtypesofthefamily.

　　Firstoneissingleagedperson,theproportionis6%thatthereare54000peoper.Nextisagedcouple,with48000peoplewhichproportionis4%,lowerthanthesingleagedperson.Andthethirdtypehasadramaticallyincrease,theproportioninpovertyjumpinto19%with359000people.Thesingle,nochildrenfamilymusttaketoomuchpressureonboththefamilyandthejob.Andbeneththatisthecouple,nochildrenfamily,theproportionofitis7%with211000people.Nextbutthebiggestproportionofallthetypesissoleparent,21%ineachhouseholdtypelivinginpoverty.With12%thecouplewithchildrenisthelasttype.Thetotallypeopleofthetableis1837000,andtheaverageproportionis11%.

　　Therearethreetypesabovetheaverageproportion,single,nochildren,soleparentandcouplewithchildren.Andsingleagedperson,agedcoupleandcouple,nochildrentypesaretheopposite.Itseemsobviousthatthefamilywhichhavechildrenwillbemorepovertyineachhousehold.Singlewouldbemorepartofpovertythanthosecouple.