帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错AForeverFriendIhaveafriend.Sheismybestfriend.Oneday,Iamsaid,Idon'tsayanything.Shesitsnexttome.Shedoesn'taskmewhyIamcry.Shetellmeajokeandshemakesmelaugh.Ithankherverymuch

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　　AForeverFriend

　　Ihaveafriend.Sheismybestfriend.Oneday,Iamsaid,Idon'tsayanything.Shesitsnexttome.Shedoesn'taskmewhyIamcry.Shetellmeajokeandshemakesmelaugh.Ithankherverymuch.Becauseher,Ifeelhappy.Sheholdsmyhand,say"Don'tsaid,Iwillfollowyouforever."Thisismyfriend,myforeverfriened.

　　Ifyouhavegotafriend,youfeelhappy.

　　Ifyouhaven'tgotafriend,youfeellonely.

　　Ifyouhaveafriend,whenyouaresaid,shemakesyoulaught.

　　Whenyouarecry,sheshavesyourtears.

　　Whenyouintrouble,shegivesyouahand.

　　Ifyouhavegotafriend,youmusttreasurethem.

　　Ifyouhaven'tgotafriend,youmustmakefriendssoon.

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