我的这篇英语短文有错误吗?Oneday,TimandBena-查字典问答网
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  我的这篇英语短文有错误吗?Oneday,TimandBenaregoingtoshoppinginthesupermarket.Theyarelookingatamaninthesupermarket.Timasks,"Whatishetaking?""Heistakingabottleofjuice."Bensays.Then,themaniswaitingforabuso

  我的这篇英语短文有错误吗?

  Oneday,TimandBenaregoingtoshoppinginthesupermarket.Theyarelookingatamaninthesupermarket.Timasks,"Whatishetaking?""Heistakingabottleofjuice."Bensays.Then,themaniswaitingforabusontheroad.Heisreadinganewspaper.TimandBenaretalkingtoapolicewoman."Thatmanisatheif!""Really?"Thepolicewomanistakingtheman,theyaregoingtothepolicestation.TimandBenareveryhappy.

  希望能为我指出错误并修改,

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  正在进行时用的太多了.如果是讲故事的话,用过去式比较好.现在时的话Oneday,TimandBenareshopinginthesupermarket.Theyseeamaninthesupermarket.Timask:"Whatishetaking?""Heistakingabottle...

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