看看这封信有没有语法或者格式问题?DearMr.wang:Mynameislin,mymotherisyouseniorschoolclassmatechenwhoisMr.liandMrs.li'sgoodfriend.NowIamstudinghistoryinXihuaUniversity.Iwastoldthatyousendane-mailtoMr.l
看看这封信有没有语法或者格式问题?
DearMr.wang:
Mynameislin,mymotherisyouseniorschoolclassmatechenwhoisMr.liandMrs.li'sgoodfriend.
NowIamstudinghistoryinXihuaUniversity.Iwastoldthatyousendane-mailtoMr.liintheChristmas.ButyouknowmyMr.lihasapoorEnglishisohereadyourlatterverypainful.Ihopeyoucanwritetohimusechinese.
Bytheway,Idon'tkonwifyouhaveheardthattheysufferedacaraccident.At2:00onSeptember23,accidentoccurredatLeshanfromChengdutoreturntothehighway.Atnextday,IwenttovisitthematHuaxiHospital.Theirinjuriesareveryheavy,butMr.liinjurieslightthanauntlan.TheystayamonthintheHuaxiHospital,thentheyreturnedtoPeople'sHospitalofJiajiang.
Nowadays,Mr.lihasstartedtoworkwiththecrutchbecausehisleftlegwasfractured.Butauntlanisstillconvalescingfromawoundinhome.auntlanhascervicalfracturedandherarmandelbowfracturedintwoplaces.What'sworse,herringfingerandlittlefinger’snervedamage.Butnow,sherecoverysoon,andshecanliveindependently.
Finally,wishyourfamilyhasgoodhealthandgoodluck.WishyouahappyNewYearandthebestofeverything.
Yourssincerely
lin
由于这封信是要用电子邮件发给一个在外国的叔叔所以我希望文中没有任何错误希望有英语高手给予指点再下不甚感激!