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  看看这封信有没有语法或者格式问题?DearMr.wang:Mynameislin,mymotherisyouseniorschoolclassmatechenwhoisMr.liandMrs.li'sgoodfriend.NowIamstudinghistoryinXihuaUniversity.Iwastoldthatyousendane-mailtoMr.l

  看看这封信有没有语法或者格式问题?

  DearMr.wang:

  Mynameislin,mymotherisyouseniorschoolclassmatechenwhoisMr.liandMrs.li'sgoodfriend.

  NowIamstudinghistoryinXihuaUniversity.Iwastoldthatyousendane-mailtoMr.liintheChristmas.ButyouknowmyMr.lihasapoorEnglishisohereadyourlatterverypainful.Ihopeyoucanwritetohimusechinese.

  Bytheway,Idon'tkonwifyouhaveheardthattheysufferedacaraccident.At2:00onSeptember23,accidentoccurredatLeshanfromChengdutoreturntothehighway.Atnextday,IwenttovisitthematHuaxiHospital.Theirinjuriesareveryheavy,butMr.liinjurieslightthanauntlan.TheystayamonthintheHuaxiHospital,thentheyreturnedtoPeople'sHospitalofJiajiang.

  Nowadays,Mr.lihasstartedtoworkwiththecrutchbecausehisleftlegwasfractured.Butauntlanisstillconvalescingfromawoundinhome.auntlanhascervicalfracturedandherarmandelbowfracturedintwoplaces.What'sworse,herringfingerandlittlefinger’snervedamage.Butnow,sherecoverysoon,andshecanliveindependently.

  Finally,wishyourfamilyhasgoodhealthandgoodluck.WishyouahappyNewYearandthebestofeverything.

  Yourssincerely

  lin

  由于这封信是要用电子邮件发给一个在外国的叔叔所以我希望文中没有任何错误希望有英语高手给予指点再下不甚感激!

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2020-05-29 04:29
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  孩子,要我怎么说你呢~大致的错给你改了一下,其他就不知道了~:DearMr.wang:Mynameislin,mymotherisyourseniorschool'sclassmatechen,whoisMrandMrsli'sgoodfriend.NowIamstudinghistoryinX...

2020-05-29 04:31:31

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