这是一片写个一个国外老师的信.有没有什么格式,语法的错误!大家可以狠狠的批评.Dear…,Hi.,Iam...,thestudentwhovisited...severalmonthsago.Ihopeyoustillrememberme.Imissyouverymuch.Howiseverythinggoin

　　这是一片写个一个国外老师的信.有没有什么格式,语法的错误!大家可以狠狠的批评.

　　Dear…,

　　Hi.,Iam...,thestudentwhovisited...severalmonthsago.Ihopeyoustillrememberme.Imissyouverymuch.Howiseverythinggoing?

　　Firstly,Iwanttothankyoufortheinvitationofjoininthe.I‘dlovetobeoneofyourmembersinthefuture.Fortunately,IamplanningtostudyabroadwhenIfinishChinesejuniorhighschool.

　　Secondly,Imadeaphotoalbumforyouandallthevolunteers.ItisaboutourAmericatrip.Thephotoalbumhasalreadybeensent.ThepackageshouldarrivebeforeOctober.Ihopeyouwillenjoyit.

　　Bestwishestoyou!

　　Yourtruly,

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