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　　帮忙看看这两篇作文有没有什么语法错误,帮忙用一些比较好的句式改一下,让这两篇作文升华!familyrulesAbouteveryhomehasownfamilyrulesmaybetheruleshavelittestrict.OFcourse,myhomehasrules,too.first,childrenshouldnotallowedtogooutorreturnhometoolate.secondonschooldays,childrenshouldnotbeallowedtowatchtvorplaycomputerthirddonotfightwithsisterorbrotherforthchildrencanchooseownclotherangmakingfriends.Ithinktherulesisparents'sloveformesoIdon'tmindit