是以第一人称写的,你改一下人称就可以了,

　　Igetupat7:00am,washaftereatingbreakfast,8:00amtoschools.IliketheEnglishclass,learningEnglishformewaspartofthefunandinthefuturewouldliketoworkinEnglish.

　　MyEnglishteacherisaverypatientteacher,Ilearnedalotofvaluableknowledge.Writepmpointoperations,9:00tosleep.

　　Thisismyday,althoughnotaverynervousday,butIhaveaverysubstantialveryhappy

　　我的一天(MyDay)1

　　TodayisSunday.Itissunny.Idon'tgotoschool.Iwantgoshopping.Igetupat6:30inthemorning.Ihavesomecerealandaneggforbreakfast.Igooutat8:00.Theshopisnear.Igothereonfoot.Manypeopleareintheshop.Ibuyapencil.At12:00Igohomeforlunch.Ihavesomevegetableandmeatforlunch.Ireadabookintheafternoon.Ieatsomenoodlesandfruitforsupper.Aftersupper,Idomyhomework.thenIwatchTV.Later,Iplayonthecomputer.Ilieonmybed.Ilistentotheradio.Ihaveahappyday.

　　MyDay

　　MyDay2

　　TodayisMonday.Igetupat6:00.Ihavemybreakfastatabout6:30.ThenIcleanmyroom,washmyfaceandbrushmyteeth.Ihavenoodlesforbreakfast.Igotoschoolat7:00.Idomorningexercisesat7:50.Wehavefourclassesinmorning.At11:30,I’mveryhungry.Ihavelunchatschool.Igotobedat12:00inthenoon.Wehavethreeclassesintheafternoon.Ihavecomputerclassandartclasses.Ilikethemverymuch.Igohomeat5:30.Idohomeworkafterschool.Mysister、brotherandIwatchTVat8:00intheevening.ThenIwashmyfaceandbrushmyteeth.Igotobedat10:00.

　　3

　　TodayisMayDay.Mymotherfatherandmewenttoparktohaveapicnic,andthenvisitedmygrandmaandgrandpa.

　　Inthemorningatnineo’clock,wewenttoparkforpicnic,wetookjuice,cornflakes,apples,oranges,lollipops,bananas,icecreams,mangoes,andsoon.Ialsotooktoys,suchasdoll,ball,balloon,skateboardandakite.

　　Intheafternoonattwoo’clock,wewenttovisitmygrandmaandgrandpa.Ihelpedgrandpatodosomehousework.Mysisterandmeplayedskateboardanddoll.Ateighto’clockwewenthome,andplayedcomputergamesfortwohoursandthenwenttobed.

　　TodayI’mveryhappy!

　　TheHappySpringFestival

　　Springfestivalisonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonth.ChinesepeoplemostliketheSpringFestival.DuringSpringFestival,Chinesepeoplelikehavingmealswiththeirfamilies,playingfireworksintheopenair.MysistersandIplayedfireworksonthatday.Wehadmanyfireworks.Theywereverybeautiful.Theywererunningintotheskyandbreakingintopieces.Theylookedlikeflowersinthesky.Wewereveryhappyandexcited.Afterthat,Imadeawish.Ihopethat,wecanhaveahappyandhealthylifenextyearandeveryoneinmyfamilycanbehappy.

　　Ienjoythefestivalveryhappy.

　　春节是在第一个月的第一天.中国人最喜欢春节.在春节期间,中国人喜欢和自己的家人一起吃饭,一起放焰火在空旷的地方.在那些日子里,我和我姐姐一起放焰火.我们有很多的焰火.它们非常漂亮.它们升上天空并且使一些地方变得很亮.在天空中,它们看起来像是花.我们很高兴也很兴奋.在这之后,我许了一个愿,我希望,在来年,我们能够高高兴兴并且拥有健康的生活,还有每一个人在我们家庭里都可以开开心心.

　　我感到在这个节日里非常高兴.