托福独立写作,求批改!谢谢!题目：Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbetter?Givereasonsforyouranswer.正文：Afterth

　　托福独立写作,求批改!谢谢!

　　题目：

　　Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbetter?Givereasonsforyouranswer.

　　正文：

　　Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsprefertoliveintheirhometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhispreference.

　　Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity.Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

　　Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.

　　Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.ItakethisintoconsiderationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage.IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.

　　Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,IcouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.

　　Inshort,mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.