【托福独立作文求批改!给出建议和大概分数Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Themostimportantaspectofajobisthemoneyapersonearns.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Itistruethatmone】

　　托福独立作文求批改!给出建议和大概分数

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Themostimportantaspectofajobisthemoneyapersonearns.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

　　Itistruethatmoneyplaysacrutialpartinourlife.Weneedmoneyforalmosteverything.ButIopposetheopinionthatmoneyisthemostimportantpartofajob.Therearereallymuchimportantthingsthanmoneyinajob.Forinstance,friendship,experienceandfeelingsyougetwhenyouareworking.

　　Friendshipthatwegetfromajobcanbereallyvaluable.Weknowthatinacompany,everyonewantsahigherpositionandhighersalary.Forthatreason,manypeoplewilldoeverythingtoreachtheirgoal.Youhavenoideawhowantstotrapyouorwhoreallylikesyou.That’swhyIsaidthatfriendshipisreallytreasureableduringyouwork.Evenifyouhavealargeamountofmoney,youcannotbuytruefriendship.

　　Experienceisalsoanimportantaspecectofajob.Inacompany,youcandolotsofthingsthatyouhaveneverdonebefore.Forexample,youmaydesignabuildingoryouwillholdameetinglikearealadults.Youmaydothosethingsallforthefirsttime.Perhapsyoudidn’tdowellforthefirsttime,butyouwillbebetterandbetterbypractise.That’swhatpeoplealwayssay,practisemakesperfect.Theseexperiencemakesyouperfectstepbysyep.Andyoucannotgetthatbymoney.

　　Thelastthingwhichisalsocrucialisthefeelings.Atwork,sometimesyoumayfeelhappyaboutyourlittlesuccessorthepraisefromyourboss.Sometimesyoumayfeelawfulaboutthepressurewhoevergivesyou.Sometimesyoumayembarrasedbecauseyourworkmatejustmockedatyourwork.Whateverthefeelingsare,badfeelingsorgoodfeelings,theyallmakeyourjobuniqueandfascinating.Alljobscangetmoneybutthefeelingsaretotallydifferent.