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  【帮忙改改这篇作文ItwasasunnydayinJune7thwhenwehadatriptoShanghaiPark.wesetoutat6:30a.m.byschoolbus.Theprogrammewasveryiteresting.Wewentaroundtheparkandtookphotosinthemorningandhadapicnicatnoon.Wewereal】

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  ItwasasunnydayinJune7thwhenwehadatriptoShanghaiPark.wesetoutat6:30a.m.byschoolbus.Theprogrammewasveryiteresting.Wewentaroundtheparkandtookphotosinthemorningandhadapicnicatnoon.Wewereallsotiredthatwecoulddonotjingbutyawn.Whatnicepalacestheseare!Atlast,wehadaclassmeetingwhenwecomeback.Ithinkthistripwillbeagoodmemory.

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  WewentforatraveltoShanghaiParkonJun7th,itwasasunnyday.Aftergatheringattheschoolgateat6:30,wewentthembybus.Inthemorning,wetraveledaroundthepark,takingphotoesandpla...

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