来自范玉刚的问题
【帮忙改改这篇作文ItwasasunnydayinJune7thwhenwehadatriptoShanghaiPark.wesetoutat6:30a.m.byschoolbus.Theprogrammewasveryiteresting.Wewentaroundtheparkandtookphotosinthemorningandhadapicnicatnoon.Wewereal】
帮忙改改这篇作文
ItwasasunnydayinJune7thwhenwehadatriptoShanghaiPark.wesetoutat6:30a.m.byschoolbus.Theprogrammewasveryiteresting.Wewentaroundtheparkandtookphotosinthemorningandhadapicnicatnoon.Wewereallsotiredthatwecoulddonotjingbutyawn.Whatnicepalacestheseare!Atlast,wehadaclassmeetingwhenwecomeback.Ithinkthistripwillbeagoodmemory.
错的地方请写出来,
1回答
2020-05-30 01:17