托福作文求批改独立写作:doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Parentsshouldallowchildrentomakemistakesandletthemlearnfromthem.我的作文:Parents’educationhasalwaysbeenanimportantpartIchildren’s
托福作文求批改
独立写作:doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:
Parentsshouldallowchildrentomakemistakesandletthemlearnfromthem.
我的作文:
Parents’educationhasalwaysbeen
animportantpartIchildren’sgrowth.Itisunderstandablethatparentswant
theirchildrentoenrichtheirknowledge.Accordingly,somepeopleholdthe
viewthatparentsshouldallowtheirchildrentomakemistakesandletthemto
learnfromtheexperience.Frommypointofview,Idisagree.
Admittedly,mistakesenables
childrentodiscernwhat'scorrectandwhat'swrong,thustheycanknowhowto
addressthesameproblemnexttime.Itisnohardjobtoimaginethatachild
whotouchedtheboilingwaterwillnolongerdothesamethingagain.Theundesirable
resultscanimpresschildrenalot,sotheygetimpressiveexperiencefrom
mistakes.However,itisnotthecaseinreality.
Foronething,somemistakescould
betooserioustomakeup.Considertakingdrugs.Achildmaybecuriousaboutthem
andtakethemforfun.Itistoolatetocorrectthemistakeonceithappens.What
weonlygetisregret,anddrawingexperiencefromthiswillmakenosense.Consider
suicide.Achildwhofeelsconfusedabouthisfuturemaychoosecommitting
suicidetoputhimselftoanend.Considertheft.Achildstealswithout
preventionfromparentswilleventuallybecaughtandconfrontsanction.Tragedy
happensfromtimetotimeifparentsallowtheirchildrentomakemistakesno
matterwhattheyare.
Foranotherthing,thereare
betterwaysforparentstohelptheirchildrendrawexperience.Theycantake
themselvesasexamples.Tellingtheirmistakeswhentheywereyoungsterstotheir
childrennotonlygivesthechildrenachanceoflearningandavoidingmaking
thesamemistakeagain,butalsopromotestherelationshipbetweenparentsand
children.Besides,childrencanwatcheducationalandinformativeTVprograms.By
watchingLawsOnline,childrenwillgettoknowtheconsequenceofcriminals
andtrytoobeylaws.B