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　　想要一下盘古开天辟地（英文）中的语法Panguisthecreator.Therearetwolegendsabouthim-one,thecreationofHeavenandEarthantheother,howhebecameallcreaturesonEarthafterhisdeath.It'ssaidthatchaoswasshapedlikean

　　想要一下盘古开天辟地（英文）中的语法

　　Panguisthecreator.Therearetwolegendsabouthim-one,thecreationofHeavenandEarthantheother,howhebecameallcreaturesonEarthafterhisdeath.It'ssaidthatchaoswasshapedlikeanegg,whichgraduallybecamepregnantwithPangu.Astimepassed,Panggugrweahugebodyinside.Whenchaoscouldnotbearitanymore,itbrokeintotwoparts:yinandyang,thetwoopposingprinciplesinnature.AsyangrosehighitbecameHeaven,yinwentdowntobecomeEarth.

　　Pangu,standingbetweenHeavenandEarth,greweveryday.After18,000years,Pangugrewtobecomeagiant90,000liinheight,whichisthedistancebetweenHeavenandEarth.Ashedied,hislefteyebecamethesunandtherighteye,themoon;hishairandbeardbecametheskyandtheblinkingstars;hisbreathbecamethewindandcloudsandhisvoice,thunder;hisblood,therivers;hisskinandfinehairbecameflowersandplants;finally,theparasitesonhisbodybecameprimitivemen.

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2020-05-29 13:58

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罗建利

　　TheGenesis(标题：开天辟地或者创世纪)Panguisthefatheroftheworld.Therearetwolegendsabouthim:one,thecreationoftheHeavenandtheEarthandtheother,theoriginofallcreaturesonthe...

2020-05-29 14:01:28

苏丹

　　是语法，不是英语

2020-05-29 14:03:27

罗建利

　　你原来语法：1.whichgraduallybecamepregnantwithPangu,pregnant不是这么用的，而且pregnant是经常指生物的正常怀孕，盘古是天地或浑沌孕育的，用Panguwasgraduallyconceived比较好吧。2.Whenchaoscouldnotbearitanymore,这里的it有歧义，下一句的it指chaos，而这里的it，要吗是盘古，那应该用him，要吗是chaos本身，那应该用itself好，可以避免歧义。3.AsyangrosehighitbecameHeaven,yinsunkdowntobecometheEarth从写法上看，这是三句，但是只有一个连接词As，而且yin，yang对等的，句式上也应该对等，改为一句写yang，一句写yin4.hislefteyebecamethesunandtherighteye,前面用了hislefteye,后面也应该是hisrighteye5.hishairandbeardbecametheskyandtheblinkingstars;hisbreathbecamethewindandcloudsandhisvoice,thunder都改为了复数，去掉了the，表示泛指所有的stars，winds，thunders都从盘古而来，hair，应该是所有毛发，不仅是头发吧，所以复数，beard，breath,voice类似都用复数6.hisskinandfinehairbecameflowersandplants,plant其实包括了flower，plant改成和flower并列的吧tree，grass，之类的

2020-05-29 14:05:57

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