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  想要一下盘古开天辟地(英文)中的语法Panguisthecreator.Therearetwolegendsabouthim-one,thecreationofHeavenandEarthantheother,howhebecameallcreaturesonEarthafterhisdeath.It'ssaidthatchaoswasshapedlikean

  想要一下盘古开天辟地(英文)中的语法

  Panguisthecreator.Therearetwolegendsabouthim-one,thecreationofHeavenandEarthantheother,howhebecameallcreaturesonEarthafterhisdeath.It'ssaidthatchaoswasshapedlikeanegg,whichgraduallybecamepregnantwithPangu.Astimepassed,Panggugrweahugebodyinside.Whenchaoscouldnotbearitanymore,itbrokeintotwoparts:yinandyang,thetwoopposingprinciplesinnature.AsyangrosehighitbecameHeaven,yinwentdowntobecomeEarth.

  Pangu,standingbetweenHeavenandEarth,greweveryday.After18,000years,Pangugrewtobecomeagiant90,000liinheight,whichisthedistancebetweenHeavenandEarth.Ashedied,hislefteyebecamethesunandtherighteye,themoon;hishairandbeardbecametheskyandtheblinkingstars;hisbreathbecamethewindandcloudsandhisvoice,thunder;hisblood,therivers;hisskinandfinehairbecameflowersandplants;finally,theparasitesonhisbodybecameprimitivemen.

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2020-05-29 13:58
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罗建利

  TheGenesis(标题:开天辟地或者创世纪)Panguisthefatheroftheworld.Therearetwolegendsabouthim:one,thecreationoftheHeavenandtheEarthandtheother,theoriginofallcreaturesonthe...

2020-05-29 14:01:28
苏丹

  是语法,不是英语

2020-05-29 14:03:27
罗建利

  你原来语法:1.whichgraduallybecamepregnantwithPangu,pregnant不是这么用的,而且pregnant是经常指生物的正常怀孕,盘古是天地或浑沌孕育的,用Panguwasgraduallyconceived比较好吧。2.Whenchaoscouldnotbearitanymore,这里的it有歧义,下一句的it指chaos,而这里的it,要吗是盘古,那应该用him,要吗是chaos本身,那应该用itself好,可以避免歧义。3.AsyangrosehighitbecameHeaven,yinsunkdowntobecometheEarth从写法上看,这是三句,但是只有一个连接词As,而且yin,yang对等的,句式上也应该对等,改为一句写yang,一句写yin4.hislefteyebecamethesunandtherighteye,前面用了hislefteye,后面也应该是hisrighteye5.hishairandbeardbecametheskyandtheblinkingstars;hisbreathbecamethewindandcloudsandhisvoice,thunder都改为了复数,去掉了the,表示泛指所有的stars,winds,thunders都从盘古而来,hair,应该是所有毛发,不仅是头发吧,所以复数,beard,breath,voice类似都用复数6.hisskinandfinehairbecameflowersandplants,plant其实包括了flower,plant改成和flower并列的吧tree,grass,之类的

2020-05-29 14:05:57

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