高考英语写作错点分析·助词遗漏型有的同学对于某些句子结构不明了，写出来的句子会不符合句子结构或语法逻辑。1. 他们渴望知道中国的所有事情，并问了我很多问题。误：They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. 正：They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. 析：eager是形容词。形容词不能单独作谓语，应该与连系动词一起构成“系+表”结构。 2. 别让小孩干重活。误：Not set the boy to do heavy work.正：Don’t set the boy to do heavy work.析：肯定祈使句用动词原形开头，而否定祈使句则用Don’t + 动词原形。3. 不经允许任何人不能进来。误：No one can come in without permitted.正：No one can come in without being permitted.析：介词without后应用动名词，根据句义应用动名词的被动结构，即being+动词的过去分词。4. 如果明天下雨的话，我们就不去散步了。误：If it rain tomorrow, we would not go out for a walk.正：If it rained / should rain / were to rain tomorrow, we would not go out for a walk.析：与将来事实相反的虚拟语气，if条件句用动词的过去时或should+动词原形或were to + 动词原形。Should 不能省略。5. 正在建的大楼是餐厅。误：The building which being built is a dinning-room.正：The building which is being built is a dinning-room.正：The building being built is a dinning-room.(www.nmet168.com)析：误句中的定语从句中缺少助动词。进行式的被动语态由be的一定形式+ being+动词的过去分词构成，或用现在分词的被动语态作定语。6. 明年这个时候，我们就能完成任务了。误：This time next year, we will able to finish the task. 正：This time next year, we will be able to finish the task. 析：be able to“能、能够”，将来时为will / shall+ be able to, 其中的be很容易漏掉。 说明:引用此文请注明出处,并请保留该文章链接地址,谢谢~~