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  【各位大大,关于托福OG上独立写作范文的问题,我怎么感觉那篇5分范文很垃圾,结构感觉不清晰很多语言感觉很啰嗦的,用词错误的地方就不说了.不知道是不是我的水平不够,还是我习惯了用XDF那】

  各位大大,关于托福OG上独立写作范文的问题,我怎么感觉那篇5分范文很垃圾,结构感觉不清晰

  很多语言感觉很啰嗦的,用词错误的地方就不说了.不知道是不是我的水平不够,还是我习惯了用XDF那套写作套路,还请各位指点,让我认识自己的缺点呀

  DISHONESTYKILLSRELIABILITY

  Therearecertainconsiderationsorfactorsthateveryonetakesintoaccountinarelationship.Peoplemaylookforhonesty,altruism,understanding,loyalty,beingthoughtfuletc!Everyonewouldmoreorlesswishthatthepersons/heis

  dealingwith,hassomeofthesevirtuesabove.Puttingtheminanorderaccordingtotheirimportance,howevercanbeverysubjectiveandrelative.

  Whensomeoneaskshim/herselfthequestion“WhatdoI

  considertobethemostimportantthinginmyrelationship?”theanswer

  dependsonalotoffactorssuchashowhis/herearlierrelationshipswere.

  Afterstatingthateveryone’sopinion

  canbedifferentaboutthis,formehonesty,inotherwords,alwaystellingthe

  truthisthemostimportantconsiderationinarelationship.Oppositeofthis

  isinarguablylyingandifsomeoneneedstolie,eithers/heishiding

  somethingorisafraidoftellingmesomething.

  Inanyrelationshipofmine,Iwouldwishthatfirstofall,the

  personI’mdealingwithishonest.Eventhoughs/hethinksthats/hedid

  somethingwrongthatIwouldn’tlike,s/he’dbettertellmethetruthandnot

  lieaboutit.LateronifIfindoutaboutalieorhearthetruthfromsomeone

  else,that’dbemuchmoreunpleasant.InthatcasehowcanIeverbelieveor

  trustthatpersonagain?HowcanIeverbelievethatthispersonhasenough

  confidenceinmetoforgivehim/herandcarryonwiththerelationshipfrom

  there.SoifIcannottrustapersonanymore,ifthepersondoesn’tthinkI

  canhandlethetruth,there’snopointtocontinuingthatrelationship.

  AlthoughIwouldliketoseealtruistic,understanding,thoughtful

  andloyalbehaviorfrompeople,aninstanceoftheoppositeofthesebehaviors

  wouldnotupsetmeasmuchasdishonestywould.Amongallthepossible

  behaviors,dishonestyistheonlyoneformethatterminateshowIfeelabouta

  person’sreliability.Thereforehonestywouldbem

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  在国外时间长了你就会发现,中国人和他们的思维方式的确存在差异.写作时习惯的表述方法,描述事物的角度方式都有所不同.尤其高中之后出国的人可能一辈子都改不过来.随便看个英语原版的教材就能发现,一个事反反复复的说...

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