请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下IfIcanchoosetohowtodie,Iwanttoimitateofhim,thenIcanknowwholovesme,whoreallycareaboutme.ButIcan'tseetheseSo,IamnotpleasednowIfmynamewillappearonthebai

　　请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下

　　IfIcanchoosetohowtodie,Iwanttoimitateofhim,thenIcanknowwholovesme,whoreallycareaboutme.

　　ButIcan'tseethese

　　So,

　　Iamnotpleasednow

　　Ifmynamewillappearonthebaiduencyclopediainthefuture

　　Itrecordedthestoryaboutmylifeaftermydeath,

　　but,

　　Icannotcontinuetousebaidu.