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  帮我看看这段句子有没有语法上的错误?MyfavoritecharacterinthismovieisMiabecausesheisagirlwithastrongsenseofresponsibility.Atfirst,shecouldn'tstandthelifeoftheroyals,soshedecidedtogiveupthestatusasapr

  帮我看看这段句子有没有语法上的错误?

  MyfavoritecharacterinthismovieisMiabecausesheisagirlwithastrongsenseofresponsibility.Atfirst,shecouldn'tstandthelifeoftheroyals,soshedecidedtogiveupthestatusasaprincess.Butthenshecameuponaletterfromherfatheraccidentally,ittoldherthereasonwhyherparentsgotdivorced.Itwasbecauseherfatherhadtolefthermotherforthegreatergoodofhiscountry.Buthewasstilldeeplyinlovewithherandmissedheroften.Afterreadingthis,Miadecidedsheneededtomakesomesacrificesforhercountryjustlikeherfatherdid.Suchactionsofherstouchedmedeeply,thatiswhyIlikethecharacterMia.

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2020-06-03 14:38
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  写的很好,只是下面两个并列句中没有连词,建议:

  ittoldher...-whichtoldher

  thatiswhy...--Thatiswhy...

2020-06-03 14:42:46

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