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　　请帮我改一下英语作文Domesticviolenceisasocialnegativephenomenainrecentyears,moreconcernforthecommunity.Somepeopleinsistthatthisproblemshouldbestopandsolvedeffectively.Othersregardthatitasaexaggeratedincident.O

　　请帮我改一下英语作文

　　Domesticviolenceisasocialnegativephenomenainrecentyears,moreconcernforthecommunity.Somepeopleinsistthatthisproblemshouldbestopandsolvedeffectively.Othersregardthatitasaexaggeratedincident.Onthewhole,domesticviolencedoesagreatharmtofamily,itinfluenceonthedevelopmentofchildrenandthemlifeespecially.

　　therearemanykindsofdomesticviolenceswhichincludephysicalabuse,sexualabuse,psychologicalabuse,andabusetopropertyandpets(Ganley,1989).Nomatterwhatkindofthoseallhaveaseriousimpactonthechildren'sphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.Thefamilieswhichoftenhappendomesticviolencescaneasilymakechildrenworld-weariness,fearandanxietyespeciallyifthepersondoviolenceonchildrendirectly.Sometimes,childrenmayfeelinferior,lonelinessbecausethefamilyviolenceinfluenceonthedevelopmentofthemandtheirlife.However,sometimesifchildrencannotbeardomesticviolencetheymaywalkoutoftheirhomeandneverreturn,wastetheirstudies,evendrivethemtocommitcrimes.Parentsarethefirstteacherforpeople,childrenwillpayattentiontothewordsanddeedsoftheirparentswhentheywereborn.Sowhentheyseenittheywillstudyandleadthempsychologicalimbalancemeanwhiletheywanttodothisinothers.Thereforetheygetviolent

　　domesticviolenceisabigproblempeoplecannotoverlook.governmentandthevictimsshouldplayaveryimportantroleinsolv

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2020-06-03 17:20

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曹靖

　　Domesticviolenceisasocialnegativephenomenainrecentyears,moreconcerningforthecommunity.

　　Somepeopleinsistthatthisproblemshouldbestoppedandsolvedeffectively.

　　Othersregarditasanexaggeratedincident.(这句没有语病但是不清楚你想说啥所以没动)

　　Generally,domesticviolencedoesagreatharmtofamily,especiallyasitinfluencesthegrowthandlifeofthechildren.

　　Therearemanykindsofdomesticviolenceswhichincludephysicalabuse,sexualabuse,psychologicalabuse,andabuseofpropertyandpets(Ganley,1989).

　　Nomatterwhatkindoftheabusesare,theyallhaveseriousandnegativeaffectsonthechildren'sphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.

　　Thosefamilieswithmoreoftendomesticviolenceswilleasilymakethechildrenpessimistic,afriadandanxiousespeciallyiftheharmisdirectlyconductedtothechildren.

　　Sometimes,childrenmayfeelself-abased(我猜你是想表达自卑的意思.),lonelybecausethefamilyviolenceinfluencestheirchildhoodandeventheirlife.

　　Additionally,ifchildrencannotbeardomesticviolencetheymayescapefromtheirfamilies,wastetheirstudies,orevenworse——thedomesticviolencemaydrivethemtocommitcrimes.

　　Parentsarethefirstteachersfortheirchildren,andchildrenwillremembereverywordandbehavioroftheirparentswhentheyaregrowingup.

　　Sowhentheyseethosenegativebehaviorseverydaytheywillimitateandbeledbypsychologicalimbalancesothattheyprobablywillwanttodothistoothers.

　　Asaresult,theybecomeviolent.

　　Domesticviolenceisabigproblemwhichpeoplecannotignore.

　　Thegovernmentandthevictimsshouldplayaveryimportantroleinfindingthesolutiontothissevereproblem.

　　看你全部手打上来也不容易.自己对照吧.我每句话都换行了的.本来弄了红字想让你看清楚点坑爹的度娘也不让.诶.

　　改了这么久这么细致不容易~

2020-06-03 17:22:03

田英利

　　首段的那个不明确的地方我想表达的是有的人认为人们把家暴夸张化了，所以不重视

2020-06-03 17:26:30

曹靖

　　抱歉刚刚好困。。Theothers'opinionisthatdomesticviolenceisexagerattedsothatthere'snoneedtoconcerntoomuchonit.

2020-06-03 17:31:19

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