这是我作的一段英文句子,怎么可以改善他?AsthestatisticaldataisshownbyChapterOne,wefindoutthatthepeoplebuyingfiction&non-fictionaresharplydecreasingfrom55%on2010to18%on2012.Ontheotherhand,eBooksiswelcomed
这是我作的一段英文句子,怎么可以改善他?
AsthestatisticaldataisshownbyChapterOne,wefindoutthatthepeoplebuyingfiction&non-fictionaresharplydecreasingfrom55%on2010to18%on2012.Ontheotherhand,eBooksiswelcomedbymoreandmorepeopleasthepercentageofprofitshasrocketedinstantly.Theprofitsofe-bookincreased6timesfrom2010to2012.
这是我作的一段句子,怎么可以改善他?