【谁帮我修改一下英文自我介绍?这是我写的一篇英文自我介绍,总觉得有些语病,但不知道怎么改,谁能帮我看一下?Goodmorning,mydearteachers.I’mverygladtobehere,sofirstofall,Iwillthankallofyoutogive】

　　谁帮我修改一下英文自我介绍?

　　这是我写的一篇英文自我介绍,总觉得有些语病,但不知道怎么改,谁能帮我看一下?

　　Goodmorning,mydearteachers.

　　I’mverygladtobehere,sofirstofall,Iwillthankallofyoutogivemethischance!Mynameis...I’m17yearsold.I'macarefreeandeasy-goinggirl.Icomefrom…,averybeautifulcity.MylastperiodofmiddleschoollifewillbefinishinNomber…seniormiddleschoolinJune,2008.Andnow,I’mtryingmybestforobtainingakeyto………university.

　　I’mahardworkingstudentespeciallylearnthesubjectsIaminterestedin.Iwilltrymybesttofinishthemnomatterhowdifficultitis.

　　Well,inmysparetime,Ilikereadingandmusic,andalsoEnglishismyfavourate.

　　ButIknowmyEnglishisnotgoodenough,Iwillcontinuestudying.

　　Thisisme.Ihopethatyoucanlikeme.Thankyouforyourlistening!