【英文自我介绍求修改Hello!MynameisXXX.MyforenameisStephen.Iamtwelveyearsold.AndI'mingrade7now.Myhobbyisplayingtable-tennisandbadminton.Iusuallyspendtimeondoinghandwritingatmyrecesstime.AndIamasagittarius.The】

　　英文自我介绍求修改

　　Hello!MynameisXXX.MyforenameisStephen.

　　Iamtwelveyearsold.AndI'mingrade7now.

　　Myhobbyisplayingtable-tennisandbadminton.Iusuallyspendtimeondoinghandwritingatmyrecesstime.AndIamasagittarius.

　　Therearefourmembersinmyfamily,Theyaremygrandmother,fother,motherandme.

　　Myfatherisamilitary.HeworksatNanjing.Mymotherisanurse.Shealwayscooksdeliciousfoodsforus.Wealllikereadingbooks.

　　That'sallaboutme.Thankyouforyourattention.

　　里面肯定有很多语法错误,但我不会改,

　　请把修改过的正文回答给我.