检查一下我的英语作文（初三级）?MyInventionIwanttoinventarobotnamedDr.Jack.Hismaindutyisseepatient.Heisverykindandhavesupertmeclicalskill.Becauseintoday,manypeoplediedofillness.Manyillnesssuchascancerthat

　　检查一下我的英语作文（初三级）?

　　MyInvention

　　IwanttoinventarobotnamedDr.Jack.Hismaindutyisseepatient.Heisverykindandhavesupertmeclicalskill.Becauseintoday,manypeoplediedofillness.Manyillnesssuchascancerthatdoctorscan'tdealwiththem.Butinthefuture,theDr.Jackcandealwiththem.Peoplewon'tworryabouttheillnessnolonger.

　　Savepeople'slifeisdoctors'duty.Dr.Jackcandoitwell.Andhewillnotproducethepollute.Ithinkhewillbeagreatandpopularrobot.Everydodyalllikehe.AndIknowit'sonlyoneofmydream.ButIwilltrymybesttostudyhardtoinvent.BecauseDr.Jackisnotonlymydream,butalsoallofoursdream.