帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.Thisyear'swinterisverydifferent,becausethisyear'swintersobeautiful.FromJanuarythe18th,snowbegantofall.Gowhere,wecanseeeverythingisputtingonacoat.

　　帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.

　　Thisyear'swinterisverydifferent,becausethisyear'swintersobeautiful.FromJanuarythe18th,snowbegantofall.Gowhere,wecanseeeverythingisputtingonacoat.Whatcolourisit?Ofcourseiswhite!Openthewindow,lookingatchangxing,feelthateverythingissobeautiful.

　　每一处有错误的地方请指出来,并且讲清楚原因,而且要改正,