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　　英语书信写作求大神看看有没有问题Hi!Mr.Charles:IamastudentfromChina.Ihopethatmyemaildon'tinterruptyouwithyourwork.WhenIsawthedetailedimformationaboutOberlinCollege,Iwasimpressedbytwothings

　　英语书信写作求大神看看有没有问题

　　Hi!Mr.Charles:

　　IamastudentfromChina.Ihopethatmyemaildon'tinterruptyouwithyourwork.

　　WhenIsawthedetailedimformationaboutOberlinCollege,Iwasimpressedbytwothings,oneisyourteachingmethod"LearningandLabor".BecauseIthinkthebestteachingistohelpstudentsrelatetheknowledgethehavelearnedwiththerealityandthatwhatIneed.Theotherisyourconservatoryofmusic",becauseIhaveplayedSAXOPHONEfor6yearsandIlovetheclassicmusic.

　　NowIthinkitistimetoaskyoufewquestions(hopemywordsarenotannoying):

　　1.DoOberlinhasthespecialtrainingprogramfortheamateurintrumentplayerlikeme?

　　2.IfIgotoyourcollege,canIgetajoborsomethingtomakemoneyandcollectexperience?

　　3.Thelastone,Ireallywantyourpersonalopinionplease.NowIgetstronginterestinprograming,sodoyouthinkIshouldmajorinComputerScienceornot?Myparentsdon'twantmetodothisbecausetheythinkcomputersciencedon'thaveabrightfuture.

　　Thanksalot!Youarehearingfromastudentoversea,farfromChina.Andastudentwhowanttohearbackfromyou,andlearnsomethingfromyou.Thanksagain!

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2020-06-07 16:54

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李英霞

　　这是我大概看了一下改过的,改过的我用大写提醒,你写作有一个特点就是很喜欢用The,有些不必要的我就直接删了,希望你认真去学一下the的用法哦,呵呵,希望能帮到你!

　　Mr.Charles:

　　Hi!

　　IamastudentfromChina.Ihopethatmyemaildon'tinterruptyouwithyourwork.

　　WhenIsawthedetailedimformationaboutOberlinCollege,Iwasimpressedbytwothings,oneisyourteachingmethod"LearningandLabor".BecauseIthinkthebestteachingMEATHODistohelpstudentsATTACHtheknowledgeTHEYhavelearnedTOreality.Theotherisyourconservatoryofmusic",becauseIhaveplayedSAXOPHONEfor6yearsandIloveclassicmusic.

　　NowIthinkI'DLIKEtoaskyoufewquestions(hopemywordsarenotannoying):

　　1.DoOberlinHAVEspecialtrainingprogramSforamateurintrumentplayerSlikeme?

　　2.IfIgotoyourcollege,canIgetajoborsomethingtomakemoneyandcollectexperience?

　　3.Thelastone,IreallyNEEDyourpersonalopinionplease.NowIgetstronginterestinprograming,sodoyouthinkIshouldmajorinComputerScienceornot?Myparentsdon'twantmetodothisbecausetheythinkcomputersciencedoESn'thaveabrightfuture.

　　Thanksalot!YouarehearingfromastudentFROMCHINA,.AndI'MSINCERELYLOOKINGFORWARDFORYOURREPLY.Thanksagain!

2020-06-07 16:59:37

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