请把错误帮我改一下,还有大概估个分,ShouldOneExceptARewardWhenDoingAGoodDeed?Asregardsdoingagooddeed,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpubicinsociety.Somepeoplebelievethatacceptingarewardafter

　　请把错误帮我改一下,还有大概估个分,

　　ShouldOneExceptARewardWhenDoingAGoodDeed?

　　Asregardsdoingagooddeed,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpubicinsociety.Somepeoplebelievethatacceptingarewardafterdoingagoodddecanstimulatehimdoingmoregooddeeds.Whileevenmorepeopledisagreethatdoingagooddeedonlyaimmingtoexpectingarespectfulreward,anditisn'tkind-heardedforhimtodoso.Allheexpectsistherewardafterthedeed.Hecan'tdoitwholehearted.WerespectthepersonwhodoesgooddeedlikeLeiFeng,notamanwhohelpsothersforrewards.

　　Astothisissue,myviewisthatrewardscanencouragemorepeopletohelpotherswhoisintrouble,Andweappreciatethosewhohelpusoutofdanger.Asweallknow,withsoceityimprovement,itisimpossibleforpeopletohelpothersliketheheroLeifeng.SowhynotthankthemforhelpingusOnlyinthisway,canbothofusacquaintwhatwewant.

　　如果按六级的标准,109分满分能给我评个分吗