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  【六级作文,Nowadays,therearealargenumberofpeopleliketocelebrateWestemFestivalssuchasChristmasDay,ThanksgivingDayandsoon.Duringthesefestivals,peoplehaveactivitiesthesametoWesterncountries.Theygoshopping,preparepresent】

  六级作文,

  Nowadays,therearealargenumberofpeopleliketocelebrateWestemFestivalssuchasChristmasDay,ThanksgivingDayandsoon.Duringthesefestivals,peoplehaveactivitiesthesametoWesterncountries.Theygoshopping,preparepresentforfriendsandhaveadinnerwithrelatives.

  ThereasonswhywesternfestivalsaresopopularinChinaareasfollows.Ontheonehand,thecontentsofwesternfestivalsareverycolourful,sotheycanmakepeoplefeelhappiness.Withthestressoflivingbecomesbiggerthenbig,peoplearewillingtocelebrateWesternFestivals.Ontheotherhand,asthepaceofglobalizationhasbeenaccelerated,theculturedifferencesbetweeneachcountrydecreased.Sopeopleinourcountrycanacceptwesternfestivalsandbecomeenjoythem.

  Everycoinhastwosides.Thisphenomenomakesculturecolourfulwhileitalsodecreasesourintentionofprotecttroditionalfestivals.

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2020-06-07 22:40
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孙艳丰

  第5行的ontheonehand去掉the,不需要定冠词

  第6行的colourful,您指的是多彩吧?可以把句子改成:Ononehand,westernfestivalshaveveryrich/variedcontents,sotheycanmakepeoplefeelhappy.

  这里的happiness是名词,应当为feel+形容词(happy)

  第7行becomes改为becoming,poeple后面的部分也改为aremorewillingto.以配合上文的递进关系

  第9行的decreased改为hasdecreased.become去掉

  最后一句重新整理为:

  Thisphenomenomakesculturecolourfulwhiledecreasingourintentionofprotectingtroditianal(Chinese)festivals.

2020-06-07 22:44:15

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