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  【高手帮忙修改英语作文--六级主题是关于送孩子去艺术班的看法.ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtclasses?Moreandmorechildrenweresentintoallkindsofartclasses.Ofcourse,therearemoreandmoreartclasseswereheld】

  高手帮忙修改英语作文--六级主题是关于送孩子去艺术班的看法.

  ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtclasses?

  Moreandmorechildrenweresentintoallkindsofartclasses.Ofcourse,therearemoreandmoreartclasseswereheldbyallkindsofpersonorallkindsofeducation/traininggroup.Astherearesomuchkindsofartclasses,theparentswanttosendtheirkidstooneormoreclasses.Sothechildrenweresendintotheclasseswhethertheywishornot.

  Somepeopleapprovesendchildrentoartclasses,whiletheothersholdtheoppositepoint.Theapproverthinktheclassescanmakethechildrenbecomemoreactiveintheirfuturelifeandtheartabilitiyisalsotheiradvantagewhentheylookforawork,especiallyinthecompetiveworld.Onthecountray,theothersthinkenforcethechildtoattendtheartclasseswouldbeaverybadthing,asifthechildrenunwillingtotheclasses,tididhurttheirheart.Maybethatwouldhaveanegativeimpactonthechild'sfuture.

  AsfarasIknow,wemustdealthethingverycaution.Ifthechildrenhavethegiftwecouldsendthemtotheartclasses.Ofcourse,ifthechildrenverywillingtostudyintheclasses,weshouldsurelysendthemtotheclasses.Ontheothersituation,wewoludbetternotsendthemtotheseclasses.

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  有些小错,修改处已用大写标出,仅做参考,望查收:

  ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtclasses?

  MoreandmorechildrenAREsentintoallkindsofartclasses.Ofcourse,therearemoreandmoreartclassesHELDbyallkindsofPERSONSorallkindsofeducation/trainingGROUPS.AstherearesoMANYkindsofartclasses,theparentswanttosendtheirkidstooneormoreclasses.SothechildrenweresendintotheclassesNOMATTERtheywishornot.

  SomepeopleapproveTHATTHEYSHOULDsendchildrentoartclasses,whiletheothersholdtheoppositepoint.Theapproverthinktheclassescanmakethechildrenbecomemoreactiveintheirfuturelifeandtheartabilitiyisalsotheiradvantagewhentheylookforawork,especiallyinthecompetiveworld.Onthecountray,theothersthinkTOenforcethechildtoattendtheartclasseswouldbeaverybadthing,asifthechildrenAREunwillingtotheclasses,ITdidhurttheirheart.Maybethatwouldhaveanegativeimpactonthechild'sfuture.

  AsfarasIknow,wemustdealthethingveryCAREFULLY.Ifthechildrenhavethegiftwecouldsendthemtotheartclasses.Ofcourse,ifthechildrenAREverywillingtostudyintheclasses,weshouldsurelysendthemtotheclasses.Ontheothersituation,wewoludbetternotsendthemtotheseclasses.

2020-06-07 20:20:05

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