Look back on the National English Speaking Competition I attended several days before，I have much to share with you．Firstly，I think the reason why I win the first prize is that I spared no effort to study hard．But I believe the saying，"No pains，no gains．"Secondly，by taking part in∧competition，I built my confidence and made friends with many students from other city such as Beijing and Shanghai．Most important，I am very grateful to my English teacher．Without their help，I couldn't have got such a great prize．Please remember that every small step we take count．Wish everyone for great progress．

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　　1．Look改为Looking考查现在分词．I与look之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语作状语．

　　2．before改为ago考查副词．before指在某个时间或动作之前，一般放在具体时间或动作之前，而ago一般只是指时间之前，且位置在时间之后．

　　3．win改为won考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时态．

　　4．But改为And考查连词．前后两个单句之间是并列关系，而非转折关系，用连词and．

　　5．competition前加the考查冠词．competition是第二次提到，加定冠词the表示特指．

　　6．city改为cities考查名词复数．根据上文提到Beijing and Shanghai表示不止一个城市，用复数形式．

　　7．important改为importantly考查副词．修饰句子要用副词，形容词important的副词是importantly．

　　8．their改为his/her考查代词．此处指英语老师的帮助，用his/her．

　　9．count改为counts考查主谓一致．主语step是单数，谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式，即counts．

　　10．去掉for考查词语用法．wish有时也可接双宾语，还可接以"（tobe+）adj．"、动词不定式或过去分词充当补足语的复合宾语．此处接的是双宾语，不需要介词．