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  【英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文.假设以下便条为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改.便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在】

  英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文.假设以下便条为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改.便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^).并在其下面写出修改后的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉.

  修改:在错的词后划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分.

  I had been looking forward to go on holiday for a long time.It finally came and I could do thatI had already planned.Fortunately,on the second day of the holiday,my father told me to learnmusic in the morning and he sent me to a holiday music school.In the afternoon,my mother sentme to the art training center learn painting.There I met several of my classmates who was alsosent to the centre to attend the art courses.After a day's study,I felt very exhausting and fell asleepthe moment when I lay on the bed..I has a dream where my friend and I were playing happily.

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  I had been looking forward to go on holiday for a long

  time.It finally came and I could do thatI had already

  planned.Fortunately,on the second day of the holiday,

  my father told me to learnmusic in the morning and he sent

  me to a holiday music school.In the afternoon,my mother

  sentme to the art training center∧learn painting.There I met

  several of my classmates who was alsosent to the centre to attend

  the art courses.After a day's study,I felt very exhausting and

  fell asleepthe moment when I lay on the bed..I has a dream where

  my friend and I were playing happily.

  详

  1.go改为going 考查动名词 由于固定短语lookforward to 中的to为介词,其后应接动名词作宾语;故用going.

  2.that改为what 考查连接代词 此处用在动词do之后,引导宾语从句;由于该从句中缺少宾语,意为:所…的;故用what.

  3.Fortunate改为Unfortunately 考查句意理解 结合上下文可知,作者一直都盼望着能去度假,但没想到假期的第二天,就被父亲告知要送作者去学习音乐,因此对作者来说,这应该是一件很不幸的事;故用Unfortunately.

  4.the改为an 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰名词短语art training center,表示泛指一家艺术培训中心,故用不定冠词;由于art首字母的发音为元音/ɑ:/;故用an.

  5.learn之前加to 考查动词不定式 此处在句中做目的状语,应使用动词不定式;故在learn之前加to.

  6.was改为were 考查主谓一致 本句为定语从句;由于关系代词who指代的是先行词several of my classmates,故谓语动词用were.

  7.exhausting改为exhausted 考查形容词 此处在句中作表语,用来说明主语I的状况,应使用由过去分词转化来的形容词;故用exhausted.

  8.去掉when 考查连词"the+时间名词moment"的用法 themoment表示"一…就…",用来引导时间状语从句,相当于"hardly/scarcely…when…";故去掉when.

  9.has改为had 考查时态 根据上下文都使用了一般过去时可知,本文描述的是过去发生的事情,故用had.

  10.friend改为friends 考查名词的单复数 由于作者不可能只有一个朋友,故此处应使用名词的复数形式;故用friends.

2020-06-08 01:35:00

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