请改正下面短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
请改正下面短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The first time I went away from home without my parents was when I was ten．I go on aschool trip with my class to the zoo in Beijing．We left home earlier in the morning because wehad long journey．We travelled to Beijing with bus and we spent the whole day at the zoo．
I can remember see an elephant for the first time．I was very exciting!At midday，we ate outpicnic lunch in a park near the zoo．After lunch，they visited the reptile house but saw thesnakes and crocodiles．It was fantastic．At five o'clock，we got on the bus and we drove tohome．I was a little tired，but I was very happily．It was the best trip I can remember!