【英语句子改错1.Peoplealwaystendtochasetheirhappinessdeliberately.[低频警示]chase...happiness在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语2.Somepersonsstruggledtheirlivestoattaintheirgratification,buteventuallyfoundthegr】

　　英语句子改错

　　1.Peoplealwaystendtochasetheirhappinessdeliberately.[低频警示]chase...happiness在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　2.Somepersonsstruggledtheirlivestoattaintheirgratification,buteventuallyfoundthegratificationwasintheprocessthattheydidnotenjoyit.

　　{句子错误]本句语法不规范,请检查!

　　[动词错误]动词struggle后面建议添加介词for动词struggle和名词life中间的介词分布好评报错

　　[低频警示]attain...gratification在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　3.Somewouldfeelhappywhengothighscore,somewouldfeelhappywhenadmittedbygoodschools,somewouldfeelhappywhenachieveincareer

　　[句子错误]本句语法不规范,请检查!

　　[名词错误]highscore前面冠词缺失

　　[低频警示]whenachieveincareer在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　[低频警示]admittedbygoodschools在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　[低频警示]somewouldfeelhappy在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　4.Actually,whenexperiencedarduousstriving,onemay

　　understandtheimplicationofhappinessandwillcherishtheirjoyful

　　life.

　　[教师点评][低频警示]arduousstriving,theimplicationofhappiness,experiencedarduousstriving在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　5There'sanoldproverb,"Moneycancurehunger,butitcan'tcurehappiness"whichsimplymeanswealthcanbuyussomematerialthingsbutcan'tmakeushappyandunrestrainedfromsadnessandworries.

　　[句子错误]本句语法不规范,请检查!

　　[低频警示]cure...happiness在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

　　6.So,Ifirmlybelievethatifwealwayshavehappiness,we'llnevergiveupthebelieftolife.

　　[教师点评][句子错误]本句语法不规范,请检查!好评报错[连词错误]

　　连词错误,建议将动词+that+连接词+从句改为动词+连接词+从句.

　　将上面这些改成语法正确的句子.如果是低频词汇的把其换成高频词汇,可以写同义句但不要改变句子的意思.