Iliketohaveahealthydietfood.Itisusefulformetoeathealthyfood.Itoffersmealotofenergy.Weneedtohealthyfoodratherthanjunkfoodorfastfood.Hamburgersandfrenchfriesarethecommonexamplesofjunkfood.Althoughtheytastedelicious,theydon'thaveenoughnutrientsbuttheyhavethelargeamountofcarbohydrateandfats.Theywillmakeyourweightunbalanced.Bread,rice,orvegetables,arethecommonexamplesofthehealthyfood.Theyhavealargeamountofnutrientswhichprovideyouenergy,andawayfromdiseases.

　　这里面有很多初一没有学到的单词，再改改

　　那换一个吧看这个怎么样？HealthyfoodWemusteathealthyfoodbecauseitcanbringushappiness,buttherearemanykindsoffoodsowemustknowabouthealthyfood,nowletmetellyou.Thevegetablesaregoodforyourhealth,whyisit?Toanswerthequestion,therearemanynutrientsinvegetables.Thevitaminsaregoodforyoureyes,skinandhair,theyareinvegetablestoo.Mineralsandfiberaregoodtoo,mineralscanmakeyourbonesandteethstrongandfibercleanstheinsideofyourbody.Suchascarrots,cucumbers,onionsandspinaches.Therearehealthyfoods,Ithinkyouknowwhatarehealthyfood,solet’schooseandeathealthy.健康食物我们必须吃健康的食物，它可以给你带来幸福，但是食物有许多种类，所以你必须对健康的事物有所了解，现在，我会告诉你。蔬菜对你的身体有好处，为什么呢？对问题进行回答，有许多营养在蔬菜里。维生素对你的眼睛，皮肤，头发有好处。矿物质对你的骨和牙齿有好处，纤维可以清理你的内脏。比如说胡萝卜，苦瓜，洋葱和菠菜。这些就是健康的事物，我想你已经知道什么是健康的食物，所以我们选择吃健康的食物。

　　不用说明蔬菜有维生素和矿物质，只要说对我们有好处就行了

　　那你试着自己改改，不要养成总是依赖别人的习惯，这样对你今后没有好处