帮我检查一下我的英语作文有没有错.MydreamInfiveyears,Iwanttobeapoliceman.BecauseIthinkpolicemenareverymightyandhandsome,soIwanttobeapolicemaninmyfuture.WhenIwasaten-year-oldchild,Iwantedtobeadoctor.

　　帮我检查一下我的英语作文有没有错.

　　Mydream

　　Infiveyears,Iwanttobeapoliceman.BecauseIthinkpolicemenareverymightyandhandsome,soIwanttobeapolicemaninmyfuture.WhenIwasaten-year-oldchild,Iwantedtobeadoctor.Becausetheycanhelpcurepatients,andtheyworkinthehispital.SoIhadalotofdream.ButnowIwanttobeavet,becauseIloveanimals.Ioftenplaywithanimals.Vetscanlookafteranimalsandtheycanworkwithanimalseveryday.IbelieveIcanbeavetinmyfuturebecauseitismydream.