英语作文检查……学校要求按格式写一篇游记,写完之后我不知道有没有语法上的错误（最近中式英文很厉害）麻烦大家帮忙看看Inthissummerholiday,IwenttoPanlongGorgewithmyclassmates.PanlongGorgei

　　英语作文检查……

　　学校要求按格式写一篇游记,写完之后我不知道有没有语法上的错误（最近中式英文很厉害）麻烦大家帮忙看看

　　Inthissummerholiday,IwenttoPanlongGorgewithmyclassmates.

　　PanlongGorgeisaplacewhichwithscenicbeauty,thegreenhillsandclearwatersmadeusrelaxed.

　　Favoritescenery:Thewaterandthelavenders.

　　Thewatergaveusadeepimpression,treesgrownaroundthebothsidesoftherivuletandwateriscoolandclear.

　　Ifyoulookoutofthewindow,youwillseethelavendersisfullofyoueyes.Howbeautifultheyare!Everyonewhohasbeentotheresays.

　　Memorablemoment:

　　Wewereeatingdeliciousfoodwhileweareenjoyingthebeautifulscenery,duringthattime,wecouldhearthesongsofbird,andbreathethefreshair.IneverfeeleasedsinceIhavegoneintograde9.