检查英语作文Afterthestory”UnderTheMoon”ThisisaSciencefictionabouttheearth.Kaihandrillaareleadingactor.ThereareworkinginspaceshipOM-45.Oneday,thesatellitegavesomediffenertnumberabouttheAOL.theyfoundtheAOLis

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　　Afterthestory”UnderTheMoon”

　　ThisisaSciencefictionabouttheearth.

　　Kaihandrillaareleadingactor.ThereareworkinginspaceshipOM-45.Oneday,thesatellitegavesomediffenertnumberabouttheAOL.theyfoundtheAOLisbreakingup.

　　TheEarthiaatrisk.sotheywanttoseethecommanderofEarthandtalkaboutthisproblem.

　　theEarthcommandercalledGogistherichestmanonEarthandtheworstmanonEarth.Twoyearsago,amannamedAdaihasfoundtheholeintheAOL,andhetoldtotheGogbecausehewantedmoremoneyfortheAOL.butEarthcommanderwasveryangil,hesentAdaitothecolonyundertheMoon.whytheearthcommanderdidthat,becausehedosen’tliketheearth,hewanttoliveinMars,heismakingaspaceshipforMars.

　　Ontheway,kaihandrillasawthecommanderofAustralia,.heisakindman,helovetheearth—hewanttoprotectthisplanet.sohewanttohelpkaihandrilla.

　　Whenkaihandrillasawtheearthcommander—Gogandaftertalk,Gogwasveryangryandputhiminprison.

　　EveryonehateGog.whenZadakknowkaihandrillawasinprison,hewantedtokillGog,butheisn’tsucced,andGogkilledhim.

　　Gogveryangry,hewanttodestroyearth.

　　CaptainofspaceshipOM-45—sernsavedkaihandrilla.andthenAdaitookthemtotheMoon.

　　Storyisconclude.whatwillbecomeoftheearth?

　　Afterthestory,Ithink,weshouldprotectourenvironment,protectourplanet.

　　Inourlife,weshouldn’tleavelitter.weshouldprotectionofwaterresources.Weshoulddomorethingstoprotectourplanet.

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