帮忙检查一下这片英语作文(急)初一英语MyfavouritepetMyfavouritepetisamouse.Heismypet.Heisabout1yearsold.WecalledhimDumpling,becauseheisquitefat.Hehasgrey-and-blackfur.Hispawsispink.Hehastwobigblack
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Myfavouritepet
Myfavouritepetisamouse.Heismypet.Heisabout1yearsold.WecalledhimDumpling,becauseheisquitefat.
Hehasgrey-and-blackfur.Hispawsispink.Hehastwobigblackeyesandashottail.Hehuddleslikeaballwhenhesleeps.
Heisfriendly,butsometimesheisnaughty.Heranawayforsometimes.Wealwaysfindhiminthecorneroftheroom.Heisquitequiet.Henevermakesanynoise,evenwhenheishungry.
Heusuallyeatscereal,sometimesheeatsvegetablesandfruit.Heisn’tanytrouble.HelivesinahutchandIputthehutchinabox.Helikestoeatapplebest.hehatestohaveashower.
IfeedDumplingeverydayandgivehimcleanwater.Isometimespalywithhim.
Dumplingisreallyagoodfriend.HebringsmehappyandIwilllookafterhimuntiltheend.