请问这个英语短文有错误吗?The2008OlympicGameswasheldinourcountry.peoplefromtheworldwerefloodedintoourcapital-beijingtoattendthisgreatsportsmeeting.TheopeningandclosingceremonyoftheOlympicGameswasgrand.51gol

　　请问这个英语短文有错误吗?

　　The2008OlympicGameswasheldinourcountry.peoplefromtheworldwerefloodedintoourcapital-beijingtoattendthisgreatsportsmeeting.

　　TheopeningandclosingceremonyoftheOlympicGameswasgrand.

　　51goldmedalswerecapturedbytheChinesethistime.Ithinkchineseathletesareverybraveandgreat,weareproudofthem,theyareourheroes,wewonthefirstplaceinthe2008OlympicGames.

　　Ithinkweshouldlearnthespiritofpersistencefromthem.

　　考试会写这个。

　　希望大家帮忙好好修改修改。