【LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthem】
LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.
第一行:two-days改为two-day第二行:mountain前加a第三行:noon后加when第四行:them改为us第五行:visiting改为visited第六行:pictures;passed第七行:去down第八行:and改为but第九行:去at