帮忙改一篇英语作文!急apersonwhohelpedmealotthereisaperson,whohelpedmealot.sheismymother.sheiskindandattentive.iloveherverymuch.onceihadifever.shelookedaftermenightandday.shemadedeliciousfoodforme,but
帮忙改一篇英语作文!急
apersonwhohelpedmealot
thereisaperson,whohelpedmealot.sheismymother.sheiskindandattentive.iloveherverymuch.onceihadifever.shelookedaftermenightandday.shemadedeliciousfoodforme,buthermealswasn'taswellasmine.ifshedidn'ttakecareofmesuchgreat,iwouldn'tgetwellsuchquickly.besidesthat,shesendsmetoschooleveryday.andshehastogetupearlytopreparebreakfast.istillremenberonething.lastterm,itoldherthatididn'tgetgoodgradesintheChinesetest.insteadofgettingangryonme,shesoothedme.(……)
Allinallthen,shehelpedmealot.andshebroughtmehappinessandpower.
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