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  【雅思G类小作文批改!你在超市碰到一个事故,请你给主管写信,要求1.saywhoyouare2.givedetailsabouttheaccident3.suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents以下为本人信件:dearsir,I'macustomerwho】

  雅思G类小作文批改!

  你在超市碰到一个事故,请你给主管写信,要求1.saywhoyouare2.givedetailsabouttheaccident3.suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents

  以下为本人信件:

  dearsir,

  I'macustomerwhocometoyoursupermaketeverydayforthegoodsIneedinthedailylife.

  Buttoday,Ihadbeenhurtbyoneoftheheavinthingswhichwasputonthehighinyourmarket.Asyoursupermakethaslesschairscomparedwhitthelotsofpeople,soIcouldn'tfindachairthatwasfree.Withoutchair,itishardtogetthegoodswhichwereputonthehigh.Ihadcalledtheserversinthemarket,buttheyweretoobusytohelpme.SoIshouldpickeditdownbymyself.AndthenIhadbeenhurtbythethings

  thatwereputonthehigh.

  SoIwritethislettertosuggestyoutopreventthisaccidenthappenagain.Youshouldaddmorechairsorserversinsidethesupermakettomakepeoplesafety.

  seeyou.

  TOM

  4thDec

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2020-06-11 19:24
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饶进军

  DearSir./Madam,

  MynameisTomandIamacustomerofyoursupermarket.TodayIfellofftheladderwhiletryingtoreachabottleofshampooonthetopshelf.

  Alltheothersweresoldout,therewasonlyonebottleleftanditwasputonthetopshelf.Iaskedforhelp,butalltheassistantswerebusy.ThenItriedtogetitbymyself.Ittookmealongtimetofindaladder.Evenwhenistoodonthetopoftheladder,theshampoowasstillveryhardtoreach.TheaccidenthappenedwhenIstoodonthetipofmytoes,Ilostbalanceandfellofftheladder.someotherbottlesfelloffandhitonmyheadaswell.

  Afterallhappened,finallytherewasashopassistanttohelpmeout.Luckily,Ionlyhurtmyleftfootankleandthedoctorsaiditwillbefineinacoupleofdays.

  IamaveryloyalcustomertoyoursupermarketandIshophereeveryday.Butwhathappenedtodaymakesmeverydisappointed.WhatIsuggesttodoistoaddmorepeopleduringbusyhourssothatcustomerscanbelookedafterwhenneeded.Besides,Ibelieveyoursupermarketneedstotrainyourstafftoimprovetheirservicequalityaswell.Iamsuretherewereassistantssawmestrugglingreachingthebottleonthetopshelfandnobodyofferedhelp.

  Ihopeyoucouldgivethisissueyourimmediateattention.Thankyouforyourtime.

  YoursSincerely,

  Tom

2020-06-11 19:27:41

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