【雅思G类小作文批改!你在超市碰到一个事故,请你给主管写信,要求1.saywhoyouare2.givedetailsabouttheaccident3.suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents以下为本人信件：dearsir,I'macustomerwho】
雅思G类小作文批改!
你在超市碰到一个事故,请你给主管写信,要求1.saywhoyouare2.givedetailsabouttheaccident3.suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents
以下为本人信件：
dearsir,
I'macustomerwhocometoyoursupermaketeverydayforthegoodsIneedinthedailylife.
Buttoday,Ihadbeenhurtbyoneoftheheavinthingswhichwasputonthehighinyourmarket.Asyoursupermakethaslesschairscomparedwhitthelotsofpeople,soIcouldn'tfindachairthatwasfree.Withoutchair,itishardtogetthegoodswhichwereputonthehigh.Ihadcalledtheserversinthemarket,buttheyweretoobusytohelpme.SoIshouldpickeditdownbymyself.AndthenIhadbeenhurtbythethings
thatwereputonthehigh.
SoIwritethislettertosuggestyoutopreventthisaccidenthappenagain.Youshouldaddmorechairsorserversinsidethesupermakettomakepeoplesafety.
seeyou.
TOM
4thDec