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  【请托福高人帮忙看下独立写作作文水平,好让自己有个数.谢谢(财富暂时用完了,后来补上,)请托福高人帮忙看下独立写作作文水平,好让自己有个数.你如何减少自己的压力?Now,thereisaquestionho】

  请托福高人帮忙看下独立写作作文水平,好让自己有个数.谢谢(财富暂时用完了,后来补上,)

  请托福高人帮忙看下独立写作作文水平,好让自己有个数.

  你如何减少自己的压力?

  Now,thereisaquestionhowyoureducingyourstress?Iknowtherearealotofwaystodoit,butwhichoneisyourfavouriteway?Somepeopleliketoreadwhentheyfeelstressful,somepeoplewanttolistenthemusic.Personallyspeaking,Ithinkswimmingisabestwayforme.

  Tobeginwith,Icanmakesomenewguysinswimmingpoor.Imean,Iliketomakefriends,IamsureIcannotlivewithoutmyfriendsinmylife,soIwanttodoeverythingwhatIcanmakefriends.AndIamgoodatswimming,soIcanteachothershowtoswim,duringthattimes,Icangetsomenewfriends.

  Furthermore,swimmingcanmakemehappy,whenIswimming,Ienjoythefeelingofthewatersurroundme.SoIneednottothinkotherthings.OnedayIgotmygradeoffinallytext.Tobehonest,itwassoterrible.Ofcourse,mymotherfeltunhappy.Ifeltstressfulbecausebeforethetext,IpromisedmymomIcouldgotagoodgrade,butthefactwasnot.SoIwantedtoswimming,Iwenttoswimmingat3,whenIbackwas8.IcannotbelieveIstayedattherefor5hours.ButwhenIbackhomeIreallyfeltmorebetterthanbefore.

  Atlast,Iknowmyfirstgirlfriendatswimmingpoorwhereclosetomyhouse.Ilikeswimming,soIoftengoswimming.BeforeIwenttohighschool,Iwenttoswimmingpoortwiceaweek.Oneweekend,Igoswimmingasbefore,Iknewher.Andweoftenmetatthere,then,Ibecameherboyfriend.But2yearlater,shehastoleaveformthecitywhereIlive,becauseofherfather’swork.SowhenIgoswimming,Iusuallythinkabouther,whichcanletmefeelhappy.

  Despitetodaytherearealotofwaywecanreducestress,butasIhavesaid,Istillinsistthatswimmingismybestwaytoreducestress.

  你选择什么方式去减少你自己的压力?

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2020-06-12 01:43
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邓九英

  楼上..人家都说了是托福作文了...

  LZ不谈内容,感觉你词汇比较干枯,HAPPY,IKNOW之类的,你可以背些替换的"高级"一点的词组

2020-06-12 01:47:28

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