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　　帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误LiMing'shometownhaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Inthepast.Theirlivingconditionswereverybad.Theylivedinasmalllowhouse.TheyhadnotTVtowatch.TheirworkingtoolswerefarmanimalsThe

　　帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误

　　LiMing'shometownhaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.

　　Inthepast.Theirlivingconditionswereverybad.Theylivedinasmalllowhouse.TheyhadnotTVtowatch.TheirworkingtoolswerefarmanimalsTheirschoolconditionswerebad.Theystudiedinanoldschool.

　　Butnow.Theirlivinginatallbrightbuilding.TheycanplaycomputergamesandwatchTVintheirfreetimes.Theirworkingtoolsarefarmmachines.Theirarestudyinginamodernschool.

　　Inshort,alongwithchinesedevwlopment.Theirlifewillbemoreandmorebeautiful.

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2020-06-13 14:22

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姜家吉

　　第二行的bad用poor更好些,用bad也无语法错误

　　第二行hadnot应为didn'thave因为hadnot是完成时标志,此处用法错误

　　第五行Their应改为They

　　第六行time应为单数,此处用法错误

　　第六行Their应改为They

　　第七行Inshort,alongwithchinesedevwlopment.不正确,不知楼主要表达什么

2020-06-13 14:27:01

高晓雷

　　第七行，随着中国的发展。打错了一个单词我忽然觉得应该是alongwiththedevelopmentofChina

2020-06-13 14:31:18

姜家吉

　　嗯，alongwiththedevelopmentofChina这样表达正确还有什么疑问么？

2020-06-13 14:34:39

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