帮忙修改英语短文WeallknowthatChinaisthemostpopulousdevelopingcountry,about1.3billionpeople,toomuchofthepopulationtotheurbanandruralareashasbroughtmanyproblems,forexample,inpoorruralareas,farmersdonothaveenou
帮忙修改英语短文
WeallknowthatChinaisthemostpopulousdevelopingcountry,about1.3billionpeople,toomuchofthepopulationtotheurbanandruralareashasbroughtmanyproblems,forexample,inpoorruralareas,farmersdonothaveenoughlandcultivation,andeventhepeopleinthoseareasdonothaveenoughfood,insomecities,manyyoungpeoplefindjobs.AndtherearealotofpollutioninChina.ThesuccessoftheChinesegovernmenttofindwaystosolvetheseproblems,itincreasesthepopulationandfamilyplan"afamily,aboy."RapiddevelopmentofChina'snationaleconomy,nationalstandardoflivinghasbeensignificantlyimproved.
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