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　　Weallknowthestoryabouttwomenandabear.Thestorygoeslikethis:Athinmanandafatmanwereclosefriends.Theypromisedtohelpeachotherwhenintrouble.Oneday,theywerewalkinginaforestwhenabearsuddenlyappeared,thethinmanquicklyclimbeduptothetopofatreewithoutthinkingaboutthefatguywhowastoofattoclimbthetree.Luckily,thefatmansavedhimself.However,thefatmanwasverydisappointedattheirfriendship.Whentheymetagain,hesaidtothethinman,"Youarenotmyrealfriend.Onlyafriendinneedisafriendindeed".

　　Thisstoryisveryfamiliartous.Ittellsuswhatafriendshouldbelike.However,itisjustastory.

　　Iwouldliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.It'smytrueexperience.WhenIwasinSeniorOne,Ihadmuchdifficultyinlearningsciencesubjects.IwasunabletounderstandtheteacherandIcouldnotdotheexercisesorthehomework.IbelievedthatIwasstupidthatIcouldnotlearnanything.Everythingwascolorlessthosedays.Everythingwasinamess.Oneofmyclassmates,atopstudent,whomIwasnotveryfamiliarwith,cametomewithasmile.

　　ShetoldmethatifIneededhelp,shewouldliketohelpme.Asshewasalsoverybusywithherstudies,Iaskedmyself,"Couldshehelpme?"Severaldayslater,Iknewtheanswer.Yes,shecould.Shedidasmuchasshecould.Shemadetimeeverydaytohelpmesolvetheproblemsandshowedmemanygoodwaystostudyscience.Herpatienceandearnestnaturetouchedmedeeply.Iworkedveryhardandmadeabigprogressinmyexamination.Iappreciatedherhelpverymuchandwantedtothankher.WhenIlookedather,onceagainshesmiledatmewithanencouragingandcongratulatorylook.AtthatmomentIunderstoodthatatruefriendshouldbelikethis.

　　AndIhaveanotherclosefriend,wegrewuptogether,she’sapersonwhocaresformyfeelings,andsheisveryhelpfulandalwaysreadytolistentomyproblems.WhenIamsad,shewillbethefirstpersonpersontobebymyside.Whatshewilldoisjusttohearmecrywithoutsayinganything.Andthenshewilltakemetoeatdeliciousfood.SheknowsmeverywellevenifIsaysomethingthatotherscan'tunderstand.SoIthinkthetwobestfriendsofminearenotthesame.

　　Nowadays,itseemsthattherearemanywaystoexpressfriendship.Ourlivesarebetterandbetter.Peoplenowhavemoretimetoconcentratemoreontheirlives.Money,whichisconsideredbymanypeopletobethemostimportancething,makesitdifficulttofindtruefriendship.Isfriendshipexpressedonlybygreetingeachotheronmeeting?Isfriendshipexpressedonlybydrinkingandeatingtogether?Isfriendshipexpressedonlylendingmoneytoeachother?No!AfriendShouldbeapersonyoubelieveinandunderstand.Afriendshouldbeapersonwhosharetheirhappinessandbitternesswithyou.Afriendshouldbeapersonwhocangiveyouconfidenceandencouragement.

　　Thoughthedefinitionsoffriendshipmayvary,andeverythingmaychange.Ibelieveonethingwillneverbechanged,thatis"afriendinneedisafriendindeed"!