I'mwritingtotellyouanythin-查字典问答网
分类选择

来自高俊启的问题

  I'mwritingtotellyouanythingabouthowwestudentsusetheinternet.Asweallknowit,theinternetispalyingaimportantpartinourdailylife.weoftenreadnewsathomeandabroadandlearningforeignlauguagesbyourselvesontheinternet.

  I'mwritingtotellyouanythingabouthowwestudentsusetheinternet.Asweallknowit,theinternetispalyingaimportantpartinourdailylife.weoftenreadnewsathomeandabroadandlearningforeignlauguagesbyourselvesontheinternet.Sometimeswesente-mailstoourfamiliesaswellasourfriends.Besides,welistenmusic,enjoyfilmsandplaycomputergamesonit.Wecaneverdoshoppingwithoutleavingourhomes.However,ithasit'sdisadvantages.Wewastetoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames,wahthasabadeffectonourstudies.What'sworse,thebadinformationontheinternetdoesgreatharmtous.Ihopewecanmakeuseoftheinternetproperforourstudies.(英语短文改错急谢谢)

15回答
2020-06-13 11:58
我要回答
请先登录
刁平

  anything→something

  it去掉

  第一个and→or

  learning→learn

  it's后面加some

  what→which

2020-06-13 12:02:25
高俊启

  亲,有十处需要纠正哟

2020-06-13 12:06:54
刁平

  水平有限,我再看看

2020-06-13 12:08:35
高俊启

  嗯好的

2020-06-13 12:10:47
刁平

  listen→listento

2020-06-13 12:14:58
高俊启

  还有三处加油哦

2020-06-13 12:18:22
刁平

  前面有个错了,it's变成some,不放心的话变成its

2020-06-13 12:20:56
刁平

  bad前面的the去掉

2020-06-13 12:23:17
高俊启

  还有两处~_~

2020-06-13 12:24:45
刁平

  proper变成properly

2020-06-13 12:26:56
刁平

  看playing前面要介词不

2020-06-13 12:27:44
高俊启

  不懂啊…

2020-06-13 12:29:19
刁平

  那就加个on吧

2020-06-13 12:30:37
高俊启

  嗯

2020-06-13 12:32:40
高俊启

  谢啦

2020-06-13 12:37:19

最新问答

推荐文章

猜你喜欢

附近的人在看

推荐阅读

拓展阅读

  • 大家都在看
  • 小编推荐
  • 猜你喜欢
  •