我润色一下这篇演讲稿MyHobbiesPlayingbasketballisoneofmyhobbies.Ilikeitforfourreasons.Firstly,itcanhelpmekeepfit.Itisgoodforthegrowthofmyframe.Secondly,itcanhelpmelearntocooperatewithothers.Inmodernsociety,
我润色一下这篇演讲稿
MyHobbies
Playingbasketballisoneofmyhobbies.Ilikeitforfourreasons.Firstly,itcanhelpmekeepfit.Itisgoodforthegrowthofmyframe.Secondly,itcanhelpmelearntocooperatewithothers.Inmodernsociety,teamworkisevenmoreimportantthanindividualability.Thirdly,itcantrainmyreactioncapability.Thatcanhelpmeinstudying.Fourthly,itcanreducethepressurefromstudying.
Readingismyanotherhobby.WhenI'mtiredorbored,Istarttoread.Readingleadsmetoaworldwithoutthelimitsoftimeandspace.ItcantakemetoanywhereIwanttovistsuchastheblackholesandancientEgypt.Itcanalsoteachmealot.Mostofmyknowledgeisacquiredfrombooks.Byreadingbooks,Icanevenchatwithgiantsandlearntheirthoughtsonphilosophy,scienceandliterature.What'smore,Icangetthepowertogoonstudyingbyreading.
Playingbasketballandreadinghavebeenpartofmylife.I'llneverforgettodothem.
主要修正一下前后搭配,顺口程度还有用词习惯还有演讲的口气