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  帮我改一下英语作文,3QBusythiswordcandescibealmosteveryone'swinterholiday.Duringthewinterholidaythereisaveryimportantfestival--springfestival.ItisatraditionalChinesefestival.Atthattime,everyonewentbacktotheirhom

  帮我改一下英语作文,3Q

  Busythiswordcandescibealmosteveryone'swinterholiday.Duringthewinterholidaythereisaveryimportantfestival--springfestival.ItisatraditionalChinesefestival.Atthattime,everyonewentbacktotheirhometownandhadaget-togetherwiththeirrelatives.Butsomepeoplewerereallybusysotheycouldn'twentbacktohome,thattheywillsendapostcardormakeaphonecalltotheirparentsorchildren.Anditwillbethemostwarmgifttowarmtheirrelatives'heart.Thiswavationformewasn'tarelaxingvacation.BecauseIwasbusydoingmyhomeworkhavingaget-together.ButonlyonedayIfeltrelaxing.Whyisthat?Becausethatdaywasspringfestivalmymothertoldme:Youcandoyourhomeworktomorrow.SothisdayformeisrelaxingthatIwatchedTVlateandplayedcomputergames.Atnightweturnedonalllightsinmyhouseandmakethehousebright.Thatmeanswewillhaveabrightyear.At12o'clockmyfatherandIplayedfirework.Atthemoment,thedarkskybecamecolorfulandbeautiful.Thevoicewasreallyloudandthiscity--wenzhouwillbecomemorepowerfulincowyear.Thecitywasfullofred.Redjustlikefire.Ourlifewilllikefire.顺便去个题目aspringfestival

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  1.牛年不叫cowyear!太雷人了……是叫Yearoftheox.

  2.最后,放烟花怎么和城市连到一块儿呢?逻辑上需要修改.最后一句全城市都红了,像火一样?啥意思?怪怪的.我就改成你最后放烟火许愿了.你看成不成.

  3.你这篇究竟想写你的假期还是写你的春节呢?

  4.你没有说字数要求,我改完之后大概也是190多个单词.估计你要求是200词吧.

  TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalfortheChinesepeopleandiswhenallfamilymembersgettogether,justlikeChristmasintheWest.Allpeoplegobacktotheirhometownandenjoyfamilyreunionwiththeirrelatives.Butforthosewhoaretoobusytoreturnhome,theywillsendapostcardormakeaphonecalltotheirparentsorchildren.

  Forme,thisvacationwasnotrelaxingatall.Iwasbusydoingmyhomework.Besides,Ihadtovisitmanyrelativeswithmyparents.TheonlydaywhenIfeltrelaxedwasexactlytheSpringFestivalwhenmymomtoldmethatIdidnothavetodohomework.SoIwatchedTVandplayedcomputergames.Atnightweturnedonalllightsandthehousewasreallybright.Itmeansthatwewillhaveabrightyear.At12o'clockmyfatherandIplayedfirework.Thedarkskybecamecolorfulandbeautiful.Atthatmoment,Imadeawishthatthiscity---WenzhouwillbecomemorepowerfulinYearoftheoxandmyfamilywillbehappyinthiscomingyear!

2020-06-15 07:25:10

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