英语大神进!急~这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~MyBigFamilyDoyoulikeyourfamily?Mostpeoplewillsay“Ofcourse”.Yourfamilywillmakeyouha
英语大神进!急~
这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~
MyBigFamily
Doyoulikeyourfamily?Mostpeoplewillsay“Ofcourse”.Yourfamilywillmakeyouhappywhenyoufeelupset.Soismyfamily.It’sreallybigbutwarmenough.Thereareeightpeopleinmyfamily.I’mgladtoletyouknowthem.
Mygrandfatherisabravepoliticalinstructorbefore.Heleftmanyscarsfromthearmy.Hehasduginmanycaves.Whenhetoldmethesethings,healwayssmiled.Now,oneofthecavesheduginopentothetourists.Hewroteanarticleaboutthiscaveandsentittothecompany.HealsohavethestudensallovertheChina.Someofthemusuallycallhimup.Andsomeofthemusuallyvisithim.Heispopularbefore,isn’the?
Mygrandmacooksverywell.Hereducationisn’tverygoodbutsheisareallygoodgrandma.ShequittedherjobtolookaftermewhenIwasveryyoung.Ithakedheralot.
Myfatherisafiremanbefore.Butnow,heisaofficer.Hebecomesfatterandfatter.So,hepersistinplayingbadmintonwithhiscolleaguestwiceaweek.Heisthinnernow.Buthelikestoeatsweets,especiallycandyflass.WhenIremindhimnottoeatsweetsomuch.Ofcourse,itgoesinoneearandouttheother.
Howaboutmymother?Sheisproudtodraworpaintabeautifulpicture.Shedoeswellinhandicraft.Ihavetoadmithertalent.Butsheisn’trationalwhensheisshopping!Shebuyalotofcoatandshoes.
Myauntisakindwoman.Sheusuallyshoppingwithmymother.Sheismyfather’ssister.Sheusuallygivemepresents.Sheisveryfashionable.Shehasalmostbeentoallthecakeshops.Isn’tthatcrazy?
Myuncleisahumorousperson.Heismyaunt’shusband.Heisnotonlyaelder,butalsoafriend.Weusuallytalkedonphonebeforehebecamemyuncle.Heisgoodatcomputer.So,heusuallytellsmethemostpopularlargegames.
Thelastoneismycousin.Heismyaunt’sson.Heisonly5yearsoldnow.Butheisinfatuatedwithcartoonsandtoycars.Hehasmorethanonehundredtoycarsindifferentsizesandcolors.Helikestowatchmeplayingcomputergames,too.Ihavetoplaygamesaboutspidermanorsupermaneveryday.Heusuallyfightswithmyfather.That’sinevitablebecausehewasbornintheyearofchicken.Andmyfatherwasbornintheyearofdog.
Weeatdinnertogetheral