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  英语大神进!急~这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~MyBigFamilyDoyoulikeyourfamily?Mostpeoplewillsay“Ofcourse”.Yourfamilywillmakeyouha

  英语大神进!急~

  这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~

  MyBigFamily

  Doyoulikeyourfamily?Mostpeoplewillsay“Ofcourse”.Yourfamilywillmakeyouhappywhenyoufeelupset.Soismyfamily.It’sreallybigbutwarmenough.Thereareeightpeopleinmyfamily.I’mgladtoletyouknowthem.

  Mygrandfatherisabravepoliticalinstructorbefore.Heleftmanyscarsfromthearmy.Hehasduginmanycaves.Whenhetoldmethesethings,healwayssmiled.Now,oneofthecavesheduginopentothetourists.Hewroteanarticleaboutthiscaveandsentittothecompany.HealsohavethestudensallovertheChina.Someofthemusuallycallhimup.Andsomeofthemusuallyvisithim.Heispopularbefore,isn’the?

  Mygrandmacooksverywell.Hereducationisn’tverygoodbutsheisareallygoodgrandma.ShequittedherjobtolookaftermewhenIwasveryyoung.Ithakedheralot.

  Myfatherisafiremanbefore.Butnow,heisaofficer.Hebecomesfatterandfatter.So,hepersistinplayingbadmintonwithhiscolleaguestwiceaweek.Heisthinnernow.Buthelikestoeatsweets,especiallycandyflass.WhenIremindhimnottoeatsweetsomuch.Ofcourse,itgoesinoneearandouttheother.

  Howaboutmymother?Sheisproudtodraworpaintabeautifulpicture.Shedoeswellinhandicraft.Ihavetoadmithertalent.Butsheisn’trationalwhensheisshopping!Shebuyalotofcoatandshoes.

  Myauntisakindwoman.Sheusuallyshoppingwithmymother.Sheismyfather’ssister.Sheusuallygivemepresents.Sheisveryfashionable.Shehasalmostbeentoallthecakeshops.Isn’tthatcrazy?

  Myuncleisahumorousperson.Heismyaunt’shusband.Heisnotonlyaelder,butalsoafriend.Weusuallytalkedonphonebeforehebecamemyuncle.Heisgoodatcomputer.So,heusuallytellsmethemostpopularlargegames.

  Thelastoneismycousin.Heismyaunt’sson.Heisonly5yearsoldnow.Butheisinfatuatedwithcartoonsandtoycars.Hehasmorethanonehundredtoycarsindifferentsizesandcolors.Helikestowatchmeplayingcomputergames,too.Ihavetoplaygamesaboutspidermanorsupermaneveryday.Heusuallyfightswithmyfather.That’sinevitablebecausehewasbornintheyearofchicken.Andmyfatherwasbornintheyearofdog.

  Weeatdinnertogetheral

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  1,Heleftmanyscarsfromthearmy.是说为战争留下伤痕.改成hehasgotscarsfromthearmy.,2,Now,oneofthecavesheduginopentothetourists要用被动,洞是被开放的,用完成时比较好,强调影响.改成one...

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