才看到楼主的话,既然这样说,我又做了许多修改,添加了一些高级句型,在文章中以数字一一说明.

　　总体来说这篇读后感写的很好,只有一些小问题,多属于时态方面和细节方面的.我稍微做了一些修改和润色.

　　一楼说的也很好,但是楼主只让修改这篇文章的语病,我就这样做了,如果有问题,还可私聊.

　　MyfavouritegreatbookisThreeDaystoSeewrittenbyHelenKeller.Thisbookimpressedme（1）.Ittoldmehowluckyweare.Helenhadaseriousillnesswhenshewasnineteenmonths.Althoughshesurvivedfromtheillness,shewasunabletoseeandhear.Shewasinafretatthebeginning.ButwiththehelpofSullivan,shesurmountedthedifficulties.Atlast,shebecameasuccessfulperson（2）.

　　MyfavouritesceneinthebookiswhenHelenimaginedthreedaystosee（3）.Shesaid“Oh,howmanythingsIcanseeifIhadthepowerofsightforjustthreedays!”wecansee,howpreciousitwasforHelenKeller（4）.But（5）,Ithinkthatpeoplecanrealizetheimportanceofthesightandsoundonlyaftertheyhavepersonallyexpericencedthedarkandsilencelife（6）.

　　Helenistheheroofthestory,butthereare（7）otherimportantcharacters.Sullivanisapatientteacher（8）andshegaveherlovetoHelen（9）,sheletHelenhaveconfidenceandhelphergetoutofdarknessdays（10）.

　　Thethemesofthebookaretodowithpersistenceandlife（11）.ItdescribeshowHelenspentthedarkandsilencelife（12）.Finally,ittalksaboutthemeaningoflifeandhowtospendourlifemeaningful（13）.

　　1impressedme后面加上alot,更好,还有时态有点问题,改为一般现在时.

　　2becameasuccessfulperson后面加上whowasworthothers'respect,值得别人的尊敬.

　　3imaginedthreedaystosee后面改为imaginedthatshehadthreedaystosee

　　4这里最好补充说明一下为什么很珍贵,我加上了ifsherealizedthatdream如果她实现了那个梦想

　　5这里没有转折关系,改为Afterfinishingreadingthisbook,读完这本书后

　　6thedarkandsilencelife改为thedarknessandsilenceoflife生命中的黑暗和寂静

　　7other改为someother一些其它的

　　8Sullivanisapatientteacher改为Sullivanwasapatientteacher,时态问题

　　9shegaveherlovetoHelen改为shelavishedaffectiononHelen,她对海伦倾注了所有的爱

　　10andhelphergetoutofdarknessdays.改为andhelpedhergetoutofdarkdays.

　　11这句话略显平淡,我改成Athemeofpersistenceandlifeisproposedinthisboook.这本书揭示了恒心和人生的主题.

　　12thedarkandsilencelife改为thedarkandsilentlife,这样不与上文重复

　　13最后一句是收尾,需是点睛之笔,我改成IappreciateHellenKeller.Herlifeisamiracle,shestronlyfacethedifficultieswhichcandetroyone’smindofliving.Herlifeisatragedy,buttheworldinherheartisfulloflove.Herspiritwillencourageallofus,forever.

　　改过的文章如下：

　　MyfavouritegreatbookisThreeDaystoSeewrittenbyHelenKeller.Thisbookimpressesmealot.Ittellsmehowluckyweare.Helenhadaseriousillnesswhenshewasnineteenmonths.Althoughshesurvivedfromtheillness,shewasunabletoseeandhear.Shewasinafretatthebeginning.ButwiththehelpofSullivan,shesurmountedthedifficulties.Atlast,shebecameasuccessfulpersonwhowasworthothers'respect.

　　MyfavouritesceneinthebookiswhenHelenimaginedthatshehadthreedaystosee.Shesaid“Oh,howmanythingsIcanseeifIhadthepowerofsightforjustthreedays!”wecansee,howpreciousitwasforHelenKellerifsherealizedthatdream.Afterfinishingreadingthisbook,Ithinkthatpeoplecanrealizetheimportanceofthesightandsoundonlyaftertheyhavepersonallyexpericencedthedarknessandsilenceoflife.

　　Helenistheheroofthestory,buttherearesomeotherimportantc