雅思作文求打分求批改Inthepresentage,theparentsandteacherswhohavetheresponsibilitytoteachchildrenhavesparkedmuchdebate.Thisessaywilldiscussbothsidesinthisissue.Somepeopletendtothinkthatparentsisthebestguide
雅思作文求打分求批改
Inthepresentage,theparentsandteacherswhohavetheresponsibilitytoteachchildrenhavesparkedmuchdebate.Thisessaywilldiscussbothsidesinthisissue.
Somepeopletendtothinkthatparentsisthebestguideofchildren`slife.AsfarasIamconcerned,thisviewmaybebasedontheconsiderationthatparentswillgivemoreinfluencetochildrenthanschool.Itisreasonableduetothefactthatchildrenlivewithparentsforalongtimebeforegoingtoschool.Thereforeeducatingchildrentoknowhowtoshowthererespecttoelderpeopleandobeytherulesofsocietyiswidelybethoughttheresponsibilityofparents.
Ontheothersideofthedebatethough,manyindividualsarguethatmaybeparentscannotgivethecorrecteffecttothechildrenthustheyconsiderthatschoolshouldplayanmainlyroleintheeducationforchildren,therebyavoidingtheharmfuleffect.Theyclaimthattheyhaveconfidenttoeducatethechildrengrowuptogoodmembersofsociety.Forinstanceschoolhavegoodeducationalfacilities,excellentteacherandperfecteducationalsystem.
Onthebasisoftheabovefactors,myconclusionisthatbothofthechildren`sschooldayandfamilydayareimportanttochildren.So,forteachingthemtobegoodmembers,weshouldtakemoreattentiontothemandgivethemthefirst-classeducationnotonlyfromschoolbutfromparentsaswell.
好久没看过英语了.语法上感觉错误很多,句子很生硬.求批改.